成功的關鍵在于細節(jié)!!無論在國內(nèi)在國外,各種各樣的競爭壓力都夠大的,見不了幾面如何留住別人的眼球甚至是心呢?那就要靠細節(jié)。∶嬖囍袚炱鹆艘粋紙團,好的,這個人夠細心,用了!熱心幫助了老人拿東西,好的,這個人夠有愛心,要了!表現(xiàn)出對公司的無限熱愛,好的,這個人夠忠心,留了!……這樣的例子太多了。別人不太注意的細節(jié)你注意了,那么你就有更多機會成功。
我們這次在秦蘇珊,給我們親愛的“老詹”老師寫的“新婚祝賀信”和辦的小PARTY,著實讓他小感動了一下呢~~沒想到補習班的同學也有這么深的感情~~
那祝賀信怎么寫?貼之~~
當獲悉某人晉升或是在事業(yè)上取得巨大成就時,應該打個電話或是寫封便簽祝賀。這種友好往來對建立和鞏固友好的商業(yè)合作關系大有益處。
Here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow:
1. The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise.
2. The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messages are most effective when they conduct no business.
3. The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational.
4. Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.
講過了祝賀信寫作應遵循的一些準則,下面我們通過一封信件來看看具體的寫作方法。
Dear Mr. Haskel
Congratulations on your recent promotion to head the Marketing Department of California Metals.
My fellow managers and I are delighted that your work in the marketing field has been recognized this way and we join in sending you our very best wishes for the future.
Through the five years of working together with you, many of us well aware of how much you've contributed to the association between our two corporations. We are all looking forward to your trip to China next month when we will celebrate your advancement in a more formal way.
Again, congratulations to you, Mr. Haskel - good luck and good wishes on your new position as Director of Marketing Department.
Cordially yours
(Signature)
Lin Daming
Marketing Director
Beijing New Metals
在這封祝賀信中,寫信人一開頭就開門見山的祝賀收信者晉升,然后又詳細寫明自己對對方工作的欣賞、成就的肯定。在信件結(jié)尾的部分,寫信人用口語化的語氣再次祝賀對方的晉升,并以此結(jié)束信件。這就是一封祝賀信的范例啦,“煽情”的部分可以自由發(fā)揮,但是一定要真情實感,太過夸張地表達也是要不得的喲!!一定要真誠~~否則的話還不如不寫,不然會讓人覺得另有所圖,那就不好了~~ |